Personalized mentoring for your story.
Story Coaching is a bit like developmental edits on steroids, with a strong dose of line editing.
Get side-by-side brainstorming, plotting, & deep dives into your story with weekly online meetings and written feedback on your manuscript pages.
We can work from wherever you’re at: a first draft or just an idea.
All tailored to the romance genre.
What Is Story Coaching?
Story Coaching is one-on-one personalized mentoring to help you understand & apply the core, key elements of powerful fiction to your stories.
It focuses primarily on structural storytelling elements. (developmental editing level work). The ‘Big Story.’
‘Big Story’ is the main focus: plot, characterization, world-building, dialogue, narrative, tension, pace, conflict, and, of course, the romance. We ensure your story intertwines plot, character, & romance, so it’s seamless and gorgeous.
Story coaching doesn’t focus as much on the ‘delivery system’ (i.e. the actual writing).
That said…I do a good bit of line editing on the manuscript pages, offering more granular, paragraph- & sentence-level feedback. Line editing focuses on the writing itself: style, flow, clarity, & strength of the prose. I’m devoted to helping my clients find & develop their voices, and if I see ways to increase the impact of the writing, to evoke stronger reader reaction, I’ll point it out.
Since I may not see the final version of a story, line editing isn’t the primary focus, but I offer feedback wherever I can.
Who Is Story Coaching For?
Coaching is for everyone! (Except puppies. I don’t think puppies would enjoy story coaching very much.)
It’s for new writers.
It’s for ‘intermediate’ writers mastering the fundamentals of the craft, or ready to take their storytelling to the next level.
It’s for veteran authors who’ve been up & down the publishing highway since before the highway was built.
For new writers, it provides an intensive crash course in fiction craft & structure. It’s one thing to read about a concept or strategy: it’s quite another to put it into practice.
For experienced writers, it’s an opportunity to do a deep-dive into the craft, refresh old skills, and get excited about storytelling again. Whether you do a one month ‘shot in the arm’ or an extended recharge, coaching will get you back on track & reignite your love of what you do.
How Does It Work?
An initial 1:1 online meeting.
We break down your story—your vision for it, as well as the current structure, plot, and character arcs if you have them. If not, we’ll talk about what might work, clarify potential problems, & brainstorm through them.
If you need weekly goals, we’ll set them up.
You go write!
You send me manuscript pages, up to 5K words/week.
I review the pages & return them. Usually one-week turnaround.
We have weekly or biweekly meetings–generally about 30 minutes–to discuss your pages & any problems, successes, or breakthroughs. We brainstorm/problem-solve, breaking down Story to come up with a plan for the coming weeks.
If you get stuck, drop me a line.
How Long Does It Last?
Coaching is set up on a monthly basis. It can run anywhere from 1 month to…however long you want!
There is a 25% discount for those who book & pay for 6 months in advance.
How Many Stories Can We Work On?
I’m at your disposal!
I can review up to 5K words/week in manuscript form, but at our meetings, we can talk about any stories you want.
Some clients want help planning a series. Some people need help with the romance turning points of one story, but want help developing conflict in another.
I follow your lead. That said…it’s often better to focus, especially if we’re doing 3 months of coaching or less.
Do You Work With Non-Romance Stories?
Yep! But my specialty is romance.
If you’re not looking for that ‘romance special’ angle–romantic conflict; intertwining all other elements with the romance; shaping character arcs around the romance; honing romantic turning points; etc–you may do better to seek out a developmental editor who specializes in your genre.
Your Story Coaching Package Includes:
Meet weekly or biweekly via online meeting room to discuss problems, answer questions, and brainstorm solutions.
Deep Dives Into Story
‘Big Story’ structural editing & coaching, with a focus on the beating heart of the story: the romance. Plotting, characterization, arcs, conflict, tension, and theme.
Depending on what you need, get access to all the written materials of RWL–articles, worksheets, exercises.
No ongoing commitment required! Schedule for the month(s) you need. When you have what you need, take a break.
Work On One Story or Multiple
We can work on one story, or if you need help with multiple stories, we can do that too.
Send up to 5K words/week and get intensive written feedback & suggestions.
Intensive line editing on the manuscript pages, offering paragraph- and sentence-level feedback to improve impact, clarity, & voice.
Unlimited Email Q&A
Whenever you have a question or get stuck, reach out. We’ll figure out where you got bogged down & get you going again.
25% Discount for 6-12 Months
Get 25% off when you book & pay for six or more months in advance.
BONUS: Access to Romance Writers Summit
During your month(s) of coaching, get FREE access to the videos in the Romance Writers Summit.
- All features & services above
- 25% off packages of 6 months or more, when booked & paid in advance.
If you’re interested in Story Coaching with Kris, fill out the form to get in touch. Can’t wait to hear from you!